Me english competence in 2013

In my opinion my best work in English that I've done this year has been the blog, because I could to do essay with calmly and with dictionary. Some of the essays have been corrected and so I have seen some mistakes. I learned to write better, because I don’t write well in English. I could to choose the most interesting themes for me.

Finally I think the blog is helpful to learn for to write essays better and learn new words. At the same time we use the technology.

My english progress from 2011-2013

After two years of batxillerat I think my English has improved in some aspects but should to be better.

Compared with the first writer and the last, now I do less mistakes although  there are some mistakes that I continue to do. I learned new words that I tried to apply in my written. When I do a writing always I learn any word, but sometimes I forget this words because I do not use.

Also there are words that I write in disorder. I forget to write words or I write unnecessary words, for example: the, of, to ...

In my two oral presentations I think I made the first presentation better than the second. The second oral presentation I had to prepare better because it was more difficult to explain. On the other hand the first oral presentation was an theme that we could to choose and we could to explain easy things.

In conclusion from the first batxillerat I learned many things. But I think I need to study more time and learn more.

Indonesia: religious minorities targets of rising violence

Every day there are more groups of Indianeses attacking places of worship and religious minorities members, for example Christians, Shiite Muslims and Ahmadiyahs. Indonesia recognizes six religions and there are more of 115 types of religious beliefs. Yudhoyono said that violent attacks will be persecuted and increase religious tolerance, allowing these people to marry... Besides the authorities must protect those affected. So far the government haven't given importance and many of the perpetrators of the attacks haven’t been punished.
I can not believe how these events still happen in the world, because in many countries there is religious tolerance and religions coexist without much trouble. People can live and share things although they are of a different religion. While any religious affects other people have the same rights as other religions. Some people don’t accept other religion than their own, but that doesn’t mean you can attack those people.
This situation in Indonesia can not change from one day to the other and neither can an individual change it. So the government has to do something to protect the rights of people and that way they can live together without problems.

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Indonesia: religious minorities targets of rising violence

Shock as 84 schools have NO white British pupils at all... double the number of five years ago

Human rights

Human rights are freedoms that all people have, because they are human. These freedoms allow a person to have a decent life, regardless of ethnicity, skin color, sex, language, religion, sexual orientation, political opinion, economic status...

They were created to protect people. Like this they may have a stable life, are respected and have freedom. So must haver equality, justice and solidarity. There are thirty human rights to promote a common and adequate life.

There aren’t human rights that I didn’t know they existed. Nowadays in some places the right to education is not respected. In many poor countries as Africa, children don’t go to school because they have to work to survive. Another example is there are places that don’t allow women to study. On the other hand in developed countries it is obligatory that the parents bring their children to school, so the country improves.

'My best pri-mate': Schoolgirl, 6, who is best friends with an orangutan forced to say goodbye as he is now too powerful for her

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Emily Sosa Rishi has been friends for six years. Rishi is an orangutan. Now they forced to say goobay, because the keepers of Rishi think that soon it will be very big and strong to play with Emily. Although the orangutan has to grow more.

Emily and Rishi met when Emily's father went to reserve of animals with her daughter. Since that day Emili's father takes his daughter to visit the orangutan.

Now they have to be separated because orangutans grow faster. Although Rishi isn’t aggressive, he can hurt she when they play.

I think this story seems a movie. It's amazing how some animals be in contact with people as if they were a person. I feel sorrow that they have to be separated because they have always been together.